Audience Feedback

I showed my peers product that i'm working on and asked for their honest opinion and what they like and don't like about it. I also asked for them to state whether they think it matches conventions and how and how i should change it.

First i asked Emma from my class and this was her feedback:
She said that i she likes the colour scheme and how the masthead is behind the main image. She said that to make it match conventions better i should make the puffs text smaller as it is quite overwhelming.

I then asked Jacob who is from my class for his opinion:
I made the changes Emma said i should make. When i asked Jacob for further changes i could make he said that I should change the colour of the text for the skyline. He also said that I should make the main image a bit bigger as he thought it may be hard to see from a distance.

I asked Alex who isn't in my class for her view:
i made these changes and Jacob said i should make and asked Alex for further changed i should make. She said that i should add a gradient to my background to give it more depth and match the conventions more. Apart from that she said that she liked the contrast of the colour scheme on the background colour. She also liked the vinyl on the P of my mast head and she really liked how the puffs don't overpower anything else in the picture.